Cherry Blossom Asemic Poem #3 - from Dark wall

[Marie Wintzer]

I've had this piece by DW for several months now but it got lost in the middle of a jar of seasonal pickles. I think it is time to bring it back to daylight because it is quite a remarkable piece.
This was an early Cherry Blossom Asemic, and the only one of the series that I actually received. I am very fond of the colors, the delicate beauty of the asemic writing, the fine details in it.
To me it is a bit like sneaking into one of DW's dreams while he is asleep. Just like a dream, the poem appears to have no clear beginning, nor does it have an end. Borders are blurry. No framing. It contains fragments of clear images, soaked in a sea of uncertain happenings.

 

Is DW lying in hospital? The test results seem to be inconclusive, if not slightly worrying. And are those the computers from Central Command? A familiar peacock is making its way through the dream, leaving a trail of prophecy behind him (it). What he told DW, we will never know. Something about feet, surely.

 

 

The poem is clearly divided in two parts separated by a blank. Dreaming - waking up - falling asleep again. The latter half seems to be more peaceful. I can see how it is a continuation of the first part, but he writing is less tormented, more constructed and organized . Regular pattern, regular breathing now... All is well?
OK, time to get out of DW's mind before he wakes up. Tomorrow morning will be like we have never been there...

 

 

[cheryl penn]

Thomas Love Peacock

My thoughts by night are often filled
With visions false as fair
For in the past alone I build
My castles in the air.

I dwell not now on what may be:
Night shadows o'er the scene:
But still my fancy wanders free
Through that which might have been.

Very nice :-) X

[Marie Wintzer]

quite nice...

[De Villo Sloan]

"Landscape with Peacocks" by Paul Gaugain - dream on DW.

[Bifidus Jones]

great work--thanks for posting, Marie

[Nancy Bell Scott]

Ok, DVS and A&S -- willing to be rescued, I believe you . . .

[Marie Wintzer]

Snooky did it!!!

[De Villo Sloan]

Sorry Nancy. I think your comments are great. I'm counting the seconds for someone to hit the delete button on the pip. 10, 9. 8....

[Nancy Bell Scott]

The kind with souls.

[De Villo Sloan]

someone's been inhaling 2 much asemic gas. the shoes nancy, what kind are they?

[DKeys]

'the troll self deleted' THAT is classic. and true as well. He's a member of the deliterati for sure. Nancy, watch out for Dark Wall. He likes to make the girls cry